Day 50 (2) – Titles and Headlines ? What do you think ?

December 11, 2009 By 6 Comments

Hi All

I just thought I would post this screen cap from the warrior forum with 3 of my Warrior Specials Offers (WSO’s) that I have just paid to bump. As you all will know by now Im planning to produce many of these WSO and I know I can produce some really good products, but Im not a copywriter.. So I thought I would post this screen cap of my WSO’s to get some feedback.

What do you think to these headlines / titles ? Would they make you want to click on them ? Im looking for all feedback both good and bad.. I know I need to learn copywriting more.. In fact Im looking to get a family member learning it who would be a lot better than me ( Listening Shaun ? ;) ) anyway all thoughts would be very much appreciated.

WF Screen Cap

I have included links to the offers here so if any of you have time to look at the whole copy for the offers Id love feed back on the main copy too.

WSO 1 – *Over 70 Royalty Free Music Tracks with PLR*. Great for Presentations/Websites!

This is my best selling WSO to date .

WSO 2- MASTER RESALE RIGHTS-Make BIG $$$ from Licensing with this Product. Limited amount sold with MRR. $$

This is a great product, has done well, had a real good sales patch , sold 6 in 4 hours, but cant remember the headline I used :)

WSO 3 – *FREE WSO* From Jail and Despair To Internet Marketing Millionaire? Can I make my Millions Back?

This is building a good list for me, but could always do better.

WSO 4 – Insider tips from Russell Brunson, Rich Schefren, Matt Bacak and more. all my seminar notes only $7!

I thought this product would sell better than it has.. I has done ok, and made enough to keep bumping it, but thought more people would be interested in this one as the notes are great.

I change the headlines around all the time on these every time I bump the adverts btw…

Thanks all ! , Until tomorrow

P.S – If any of you have any good tips for copywriting courses / books please let me know ! :)

Mark Lyford – Mark Lyford.com

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  • http://www.bradgosse.com Brad Gosse

    It’s funny because if I had to guess, I would think that the royalty free music tracks would be the worst seller. In my experience, people don’t buy as much content as they do courses, how-to’s, and e-books.

    It’s always a surprise.

  • admin

    I agree I thought it wouldn’t be a big seller too.. just goes to show you never can tell really

  • http://richquickreview.com/ Shane

    Hi Mark,

    I’m not much of a copywriter myself, but from what I’ve observed, I can say this: Concrete money claims seem to work wonders.
    I personally dislike that kind of thing, but “Make $340 per day with this system!” type of headlines seem to do very well. At least, with a newbie crowd.

    While we’re at it, don’t forget to include the usual slew of buzzwords: autopilot, hands-off, money while you sleep, secret, underground, limited time only,…
    And maybe sprinkle a few “guru” mentions in there as well?

    Okay, I was kidding with the second part, but for testing purposes, I would recommend you try one headline with a concrete money claim and see what happens.

    Cheers,
    Shane

  • admin

    Thanks for your input Shane :)

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    I agree with Shane. The ones that I tend to click on most often are the “Make $ in this amount of time…”.

    The curiosity factor works well for getting clicks.

    Have a great week & thanks for all the great reading!

    Lisa

  • http://www.coachdavidgcarpenter.com David G. Carpenter

    As to copywriting: American Writers and Artists Institute has a great course (AWAI), also follow copyblogger on twitter.
    Namaste,
    David